PAB
#2
In my
article, which covers how embarrassment, identity and the knowledge that an audience
exists and can possibly see your posted content effects what is posted in
relation to how one views their self-identity and how they cope with potential embarrassment.
The argument is that there are links between posted content and how they think
said info will shape their online “Self-identity”. While most of the info shows
that even if embarrassed the majority would laugh it off some would delete it.
Interestingly enough the closer the posted info was to fitting their personality
the less likely they were to delete it. The article covers Facebook as the
source of its info and as such can be used in tandem with my first PAB. In
terms of support this article is iron clad with over 50 separate references to
further academic sources. Because of this I feel that the information if surrounded
by a well thought out thesis could do much to argue my inquiry which is also
based in Facebook and the effects on the platform to the actual person using
it. The conclusion concludes that there is a positive link between posted
content and whether there is an emotional/mental response. The article refers
to potential threats to the personal view of self as “Face-Threatening attacks”
and this makes many appearances throughout the article and is potentially the
biggest source ill implement in my future paper drafts. I’d say that this
article has a wealth of value that I will take advantage off and weave into a
strong narrative with more time.
Works cited
Anne Oeldorf-Hirsch., et al. “Your post is
embarrassing me: Face threats, identity, and the audience on Facebook” Computers
in Human Behavior, Vol.73,(2017) Journal homepage: www.elsevier.com/locate/comphumbeh
Accessed 5 April. 2017
this article sounds perfect. Wordy sentences can distract from your writing. I can help you with that, or you can see a writing tutor. You have excellent ideas.
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