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Friday, March 10, 2017

Paper #2 (Final Draft)

Paper #2 Rhetorical Analysis
            Rhetoric by definition means “the art of effective or persuasive speaking or writing, especially the use of figures of speech and other compositional techniques”. Inherent in the definition the goal of the author is to persuade. Ways to accomplish persuasion are to appeal to human values. While these very values are subject to individuals bias there are overarching approaches that are more or less effective based on the individual. Ethos is an appeal to ethics, and it is a means of convincing someone that they can be trusted based on their character and reputation. Pathos is an appeal to emotion, and is a way of convincing an audience through raising an emotional response while Logos is an appeal to logic. These tools are used in literary settings to argue a point and as evidenced by President Trump can be used to create strong arguments if utilized well.
            I have chosen a post from the president of the United States, Donald Trump. Based on his personal preferences Trump chooses to utilize the social media site “Twitter” for both personal and political posts. The platform Twitter has a character limit of 140 per post. The character limit effects the way the platform is used. Being limited to 140 characters means that this platform doesn’t have the utility that a book or a blog provides due to the limiting of space. This limit its safe to say forces the user to condense their posts and makes the focus on diction even greater if they are attempting to argue a point that would require more that the allotted space. This point is exceedingly valid by pointing out that a book or other non-character restricted platform allows the benefit of infinite space to the author in which they could use to construct an effective Ethos, Pathos or Logos oriented argument. Another effect of condensing arguments is that it allows and even encourages exaggeration, as evidenced by the multiple exclamation points and single word accusations that in any unrestricted platforms would be unacceptable. With these points in mind well see how Trump create strong arguments despite platform constraints.
The post is as follows ““One of the most effective press conferences I've ever seen!" says Rush Limbaugh. Many agree. Yet FAKE MEDIA calls it differently! Dishonest”. This post by President Donald Trump came in response to public and media testimonies that his speech on 17 Feb 2017 was for lack of a better term “bad”. There are multiple levels on which this particular post can be dissected and due to Trumps Emphasis on the “FAKE MEDIA” I will also have to provide context to this accusation, while the context is still on his twitter account it is however on a separate twitter post which I will also provide a link to. To begin Donald Trump Quotes Rush Limbaugh and his opinion on his speech in response to the accusations. In the sphere of politics Rush Limbaugh summarized is a conservative political commentator who works on Fox News (also known to be of conservative leaning) and who’s party alignment coincides with Trump’s own. This is telling in who the audience of this tweet. Rush Limbaugh is a very well-known and respected figure in republican media and as such his opinion would hold significant weight with those who agree with him and have developed a following so the target audience is republicans. This is a tactical move on Trumps part, by actively including Rush Limbaugh he is using his reputation to solidify his own while appealing to their Republican audience! This is a direct example of ethos use.
Donald Trump in the first half of his point defends his speech and himself as I’ve argued and for the second half he employs an Ad Hominem attack on the “FAKE MEDIA”. To build on that first we must look at what an Ad Hominem attacks is. An ad hominem attack is a logical fallacy in which an argument is diverted or ignored by attacking the character, motive, or other attribute of the “person” making the argument, or persons associated with the argument, rather than attacking the meat of the argument itself. President Donald Trump employs this attack to discredit the news outlets involved in covering the negative response to his speech. By employing ad hominem, he discredits them by attempting to call into question their bias and truthfulness. By doing this he can if his argument is accepted invalidate the criticism towards him while turning the tables and being the attacker himself. This use of literary techniques allows him to ignore the attacks on himself while creating the narrative that he is correct and his position unshaken. This appeal to his readers falls outside the realm of just an appeal to ethos, it exemplifies Logos. This can be evidenced by the very last word “Dishonest”. Logos is an appeal to logic and by accusing the “fake media” to be dishonest it would imply that the logical conclusion would be to dismiss all criticisms of this “fake media”.  Thus, it is safe to say that by analyzing just a few of trumps tweets we can formulate that he has a firm grasp on rhetoric and employs it to suit his needs in his life and business.
Quote Analyzed
Context to “FAKE NEWS”

https://twitter.com/realDonaldTrump/status/832708293516632065

Wednesday, March 8, 2017

Reflection #5

So, I’ve made arrangements to go to the writing labs so they can help me organize my paper. It’s been a pain because I can’t see where my sentences or ideas are choppy. In my mind my arguments are solid but I do agree that the order or “flow” of the paper seems off. Also, I’d like to reassess how my conclusion works. Since I haven’t implemented the changes that were suggested in the last class session I’ll probably prioritize reformatting. One addition im working on is to have a pic of the tweet in my paper so that the reader wouldn’t have to leave my blog to see what I’m discussing. Also, I’ve kind of agonized on whether my introduction is as good as my peers. The examples of good introductions actually have a intro that addresses what the paper is going to be about while mine is more roundabout and kind of sets the stage with literary background info before addressing the use of those elements in the tweet I analyzed. This is because I’ve written around the whole “Can anyone who picks up your paper follow the info”. If possible id like some feedback as to whether this is a good literary technique or if I should abandon it.

Thursday, March 2, 2017

(Draft #2) Paper #2 Rhetorical Analysis

Paper #2 Rhetorical Analysis
            Rhetoric by definition means “the art of effective or persuasive speaking or writing, especially the use of figures of speech and other compositional techniques”. Inherent in the definition the goal of the author is to persuade. Ways to accomplish persuasion are to appeal to human values. While these very values are subject to individuals bias there are overarching approaches that are more or less effective based on the individual. Ethos is an appeal to ethics, and it is a means of convincing someone that they can be trusted based on their character and reputation. Pathos is an appeal to emotion, and is a way of convincing an audience through raising an emotional response while Logos is an appeal to logic. These tools are used in literary settings to argue a point.
            I have chosen a post from the president of the United States, Donald Trump. Based on his personal preferences Trump chooses to utilize the social media site “Twitter” for both personal and political posts. The platform Twitter has a character limit of 140 per post. The character limit effects the way the platform is used. Being limited to 140 characters means that this platform doesn’t have the utility that a book or a blog provides due to the limiting of space. This limit its safe to say forces the user to condense their posts and makes the focus on diction even greater if they are attempting to argue a point that would require more that the allotted space. This point is exceedingly valid by pointing out that while a book or other non-character restricted platform allows the benefit of infinite space to the author in which they could use to construct an effective Ethos, Pathos or Logos oriented argument.
The post is as follows ““One of the most effective press conferences I've ever seen!" says Rush Limbaugh. Many agree. Yet FAKE MEDIA calls it differently! Dishonest”. This post by President Donald Trump came in response to public and media testimonies that his speech on 17 Feb 2017 was for lack of a better term “bad”. There are multiple levels on which this particular post can be dissected and due to Trumps Emphasis on the “FAKE MEDIA” I will also have to provide context to this accusation, while the context is still on his twitter account it is however on a separate twitter post which I will also provide a link to. To begin Donald Trump Quotes Rush Limbaugh and his opinion on his speech in response to the accusations. In the sphere of politics Rush Limbaugh summarized is a conservative political commentator who works on Fox News (also known to be of conservative leaning) and who’s party alignment coincides with Trump’s own. This is telling in who the audience of this tweet. Rush Limbaugh is a very well-known and respected figure in republican media and as such his opinion would hold significant weight with those who agree with him and have developed a following so the target audience is republicans. This is a tactical move on Trumps part, by actively including Rush Limbaugh he is using his reputation to solidify his own while appealing to their Republican audience! This is a direct example of ethos use.
Donald Trump in the first half of his point defends his speech and himself as I’ve argued and for the second half he employs an Ad Hominem attack on the “FAKE MEDIA”. To build on that first we must look at what an Ad Hominem attacks is. An ad hominem attack is a logical fallacy in which an argument is diverted or ignored by attacking the character, motive, or other attribute of the “person” making the argument, or persons associated with the argument, rather than attacking the meat of the argument itself. President Donald Trump employs this attack to discredit the news outlets involved in covering the negative response to his speech. By employing ad hominem, he discredits them by attempting to call into question their bias and truthfulness. By doing this he can if his argument is accepted invalidate the criticism towards him while turning the tables and being the attacker himself. This use of literary techniques allows him to ignore the attacks on himself while creating the narrative that he is correct and his position unshaken. Thus it is safe to say that by analyzing just a few of trumps tweets we can formulate that he has a firm grasp on rhetoric and employs it to suit his needs in his life and business
Quote Analyzed
Context to “FAKE NEWS”


https://twitter.com/realDonaldTrump/status/832708293516632065

Wednesday, March 1, 2017

Reflection #4

I have recently learned more about literary fallacies through the readings. While I had already encountered these kind of literary devices before I really didn’t have a firm grasp as to the total amount there were and how they are used. Honestly there are way more than I expected and actually have had a fun time putting a label on the information I had already thought to be odd. So after the reading I noticed the comments on my first draft. Fernando is a great partner and suggested that I need to strengthen my conclusion and I agree. Maybe if I prioritize the “so what?” approach to my conclusion I can provide a real wrap up. It seems that I also need to work on combining my choppy sentences and restructuring them into a single cohesive free flowing paragraph. I think my issue is I’m trying to get across my point and multiple messages to quickly and in the process actually diluting the strength of the messages I’m trying to convey. I’ll work on it and I’m looking forward to Friday where we will cover the outline. I tend to make mistakes but I try my hardest not to let them happen again and improve myself, whether in writing or life in general. Also I feel like I could improve my diction in some ways and if you have any suggestions I’d love to hear it. Thanks for helping me become a better writer.

Friday, February 24, 2017

Quiz 3

In comparing the two paragraphs while they both have merits i believe on the whole the second paragraph is more successful in convincing me as the audience. So the first passage starts with the describing of the personal importance of the topic to the author. This could be an attempt to elicit sympathy(pathos) especially since he describes the urge to be constantly coming to him. Moving forward he mentions the new testament and how his message is being derived in part by its scripture. This could elicit a response from a devout believer (pathos) and make the author's message seem to have a religious bend to it. The rest of the article involves explaining  chronos and kairos and doesn't seem to mention and solutions or way to combat climate change and as such i believe this to be the weaker article.
In contrast the second article focuses on the use of evidence and actually argues points to combat climate change. These appeals and plans to combat climate change in the structure of political and business platforms leaves the article with a logos based appeal. To further backup my statement the author of the second paragraph lays plans for financial assistance the growing of alternative energy sources and urges federal authorities to cooperate. Based on the more detailed info and plans on how to accomplish their plans i support the second article as the more effective one.

Thursday, February 23, 2017

(Draft 1) Paper #2 Rhetorical Analysis

Paper #2 Rhetorical Analysis
            Rhetoric by definition means “the art of effective or persuasive speaking or writing, especially the use of figures of speech and other compositional techniques”. Inherent in the definition the goal of the author is to persuade. Ways to accomplish persuasion are to appeal to human values. While these very values are subject to individuals bias there are overarching approaches that are more or less effective based on the individual. Ethos is an appeal to ethics, and it is a means of convincing someone that they can be trusted based on their character and reputation. Pathos is an appeal to emotion, and is a way of convincing an audience through raising an emotional response while Logos is an appeal to logic. These tools are used in literary settings to argue a point.
            I have chosen a post from the president of the United States, Donald Trump. Based on his personal preferences Trump chooses to utilize the social media site “Twitter” for both personal and political posts. The platform Twitter has a character limit of 140 per post. The character limit effects the way the platform is used. Being limited to 140 characters means that this platform doesn’t have the utility that a book or a blog provides due to the limiting of space. This limit its safe to say forces the user to condense their posts and makes the focus on diction even greater if they are attempting to argue a point that would require more that the allotted space. This point is exceedingly valid by pointing out that while a book or other non-character restricted platform allows the benefit of infinite space to the author in which they could use to construct an effective Ethos, Pathos or Logos oriented argument.
            The post is as follows ““One of the most effective press conferences I've ever seen!" says Rush Limbaugh. Many agree. Yet FAKE MEDIA calls it differently! Dishonest”. This post by President Donald Trump came in response to public and media testimonies that his speech on 17 Feb 2017 was for lack of a better term “bad”. There are multiple levels on which this particular post can be dissected and due to Trumps Emphasis on the “FAKE MEDIA” I will also have to provide context to this accusation, while the context is still on his twitter account it is however on a separate twitter post which I will also provide a link to. To begin Donald Trump Quotes Rush Limbaugh and his opinion on his speech in response to the accusations. In the sphere of politics Rush Limbaugh summarized is a conservative political commentator who works on Fox News (also known to be of conservative leaning) and who’s party alignment coincides with Trump’s own. This is telling in who the audience of this tweet. Rush Limbaugh is a very well-known and respected figure in republican media and as such his opinion would hold significant weight with those who agree with him and have developed a following so the target audience is republicans. This is a tactical move on Trumps part, by actively including Rush Limbaugh he is using his reputation to solidify his own while appealing to their Republican audience! This is a direct example of ethos use.
Donald Trump in the first half of his point defends his speech and himself as I’ve argued and for the second half he employs an Ad Hominem attack on the “FAKE MEDIA”. To build on that first we must look at what an Ad Hominem attacks is. An ad hominem attack is a logical fallacy in which an argument is diverted or ignored by attacking the character, motive, or other attribute of the “person” making the argument, or persons associated with the argument, rather than attacking the meat of the argument itself. President Donald Trump employs this attack to discredit the news outlets involved in covering the negative response to his speech. By employing ad hominem, he discredits them by attempting to call into question their bias and truthfulness. By doing this he can if his argument is accepted invalidate the criticism towards him while turning the tables and being the attacker himself.
Quote Analyzed
Context to “FAKE NEWS”


https://twitter.com/realDonaldTrump/status/832708293516632065

Friday, February 17, 2017

In-Class Mini Rhetorical Analyses

In-Class Mini Rhetorical Analyses
Personally i was interested in this post because it shows how Melania Trump as the first lady is taking on her role. Melania's posted her meeting with Israel's prime ministers wife apparently discussing matters between our country's. I would assume that this post is supposed to signify that the relationship between the United States and Israel is still strong and ongoing based on the general friendly cooperative tone of the tweet. In this case since the post is in relation to global politics i feel this post's audience is the world and its governments. Melania's choice of diction seems to me to indicate the use of logos to reinforce her role as first lady and thus her political power. For example their "friendship" is a sign of cooperation between not just two people but two countries thus raising the significance of the statement.
"Thank you Mrs. Netanyahu for your friendship and dedication " Via Twitter
https://twitter.com/FLOTUS/status/832082505528442881